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what of a woman
what of a woman
what else is a woman… but a reflection ….of the sun… as a moon …that's why women get moody so soon… then the warmth up from heaven ….as by sun’s rays are given ….women have always taken ….the longer one …and after submission …have given a wash of the cream…. of heaven …and so men burn within…. for more…. tis to be taken…. love of a woman…. is given only to some…. not everyone… if so ...then she is a whore …no woman ….
do you agree …
or
let's agree to disagree..
you remain a woman..
unlike me…
what else is a woman… but a reflection ….of the sun… as a moon …that's why women get moody so soon… then the warmth up from heaven ….as by sun’s rays are given ….women have always taken ….the longer one …and after submission …have given a wash of the cream…. of heaven …and so men burn within…. for more…. tis to be taken…. love of a woman…. is given only to some…. not everyone… if so ...then she is a whore …no woman ….
do you agree …
or
let's agree to disagree..
you remain a woman..
unlike me…
Published 3rd Feb 2014
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Anonymous
3rd Feb 2014 10:44pm
This is a very respectful tribute to women. I being one am honored and thank you. Take a bow. :)
4th Feb 2014 00:05am
I should thank you
for instilling me
with subtlety
and
words sublime,
else my mouth was like vinegar
not warm red wine,
you do poetry
and
its nuances define
with me that's very fine
women are a golden mine
with deeper ravines
and
fathomless spears
can enter
and tear
yet women do not wear
they endear
the thrusts and all
why did god make
a woman after all
for the whole purpose
to receive the water fall
and
then produce a lovely snowfall
for instilling me
with subtlety
and
words sublime,
else my mouth was like vinegar
not warm red wine,
you do poetry
and
its nuances define
with me that's very fine
women are a golden mine
with deeper ravines
and
fathomless spears
can enter
and tear
yet women do not wear
they endear
the thrusts and all
why did god make
a woman after all
for the whole purpose
to receive the water fall
and
then produce a lovely snowfall
