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Fight
I cnt live I wanna fight try but it's so hard I cry I wanna walk away n b happy but as I c u so happy it puts a smile on that face that I fell in love wit n I'm so tired I'm bout to take this knife n end it all right as tell u that I love u n I'm srry n gudbye cause tonight will b the last night I'm alive thinking of u as the my world comes crashing down on me I'll take these Knives n pens n cut ur name on my body as we slow this dance down I'm counting on u to take this knife n pen to stab me bc I cnt live without u so as my night comes to an end all I say is I love u n it all my fault so I'm dying tonight hope ur life is better without me n it bc I love ur smile
Published 20th Feb 2011
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20th Feb 2011 10:44pm
amazing man super amazing and my poem u commented on yea im only 13 seems unreal that i can write for unexpriences right??????
20th Feb 2011 11:11pm
your welcome man will do i like your poems im looking forward to new ones oh yea i just posted new ones today read those and give me feed back ok thanks
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21st Feb 2011 6:53pm
hardly read this. Where do sentences start and begin? What are some of these words? Where is the spellcheck?
"N" is not a word and neither is "Bc" And feels like you just randomly wrote words down, not expecting them to make sense with one another... It doesn't even fit as a rant. It's just completely random.
For example, you said you were going to end it right now and you seemed pretty sure of yourself, but then you say that you can't do it and she has to do it.. like.. what?!
"N" is not a word and neither is "Bc" And feels like you just randomly wrote words down, not expecting them to make sense with one another... It doesn't even fit as a rant. It's just completely random.
For example, you said you were going to end it right now and you seemed pretty sure of yourself, but then you say that you can't do it and she has to do it.. like.. what?!
22nd Feb 2011 11:42pm
Ok I dnt give a fuck bout it ok if ur like me then ull under stand wat I mean
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