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A new painful emotion
It's been 5 years
Sense I first seen
This amazing girl
Whom I claim to love
We were friends
No emotions
No Regret
Just having fun
It's been 4 years
Sense I first kissed
This beautiful girl
Whom I know I love
We were friends
Finding emotions
No regret
Just having fun
It's been 3 years
Sense we first made love
This sexy girl
Whom I've fallen for
We were lovers
With emotions
No regret
Just having fun
It's been 2 years
Sense I first yelled at her
This annoying girl
Whom I would die for
We were lovers
With emotion
Little regret
Just having fun
It's been 1 year
Sense I first walked away
This angry girl
What do I do with her...
We were lovers
With raw emotion
Much to regret
Trying to have fun
It's been 5 days
Sense she left me
The girl I love,
Whom I would die for
She was my lover
Who gave me emotion
Who taught me regret
Who showed me fun
She left me
With one final lesson;
All happy things
Share one painful ending
Sense I first seen
This amazing girl
Whom I claim to love
We were friends
No emotions
No Regret
Just having fun
It's been 4 years
Sense I first kissed
This beautiful girl
Whom I know I love
We were friends
Finding emotions
No regret
Just having fun
It's been 3 years
Sense we first made love
This sexy girl
Whom I've fallen for
We were lovers
With emotions
No regret
Just having fun
It's been 2 years
Sense I first yelled at her
This annoying girl
Whom I would die for
We were lovers
With emotion
Little regret
Just having fun
It's been 1 year
Sense I first walked away
This angry girl
What do I do with her...
We were lovers
With raw emotion
Much to regret
Trying to have fun
It's been 5 days
Sense she left me
The girl I love,
Whom I would die for
She was my lover
Who gave me emotion
Who taught me regret
Who showed me fun
She left me
With one final lesson;
All happy things
Share one painful ending
Published 29th Jan 2014
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29th Jan 2014 10:20pm
Wow! This was incredible, Dude! I loved the count down and the way you took us on this beautiful emotional journey. Revealing the lesson at the end added a stellar touch. Amazing flow! Xo
29th Jan 2014 10:56pm
29th Jan 2014 10:29pm
29th Jan 2014 10:57pm
29th Mar 2014 2:18am
I as well loved this and just everything about it, the countdown of the years, the way this changed and your mindsets and feelings changed, and the way it left me feelings at the end of the poem. It's great work. The only thing I would change in this poem is the fact that you used the word "sense" instead of "since". :)
30th Mar 2014 7:16am
Ahhhh You caught me on bad grammar, ill give it to you :) Thank you so much for stopping by and finding love within my work. I really appreciate it. :)
