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Erotic Poems
on my knees
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on my knees
resolution wanes
the hot hand slap of your words
hardens my resolve
Written by
0913338
(Semaj)
Published
28th Jan 2014
| Edited
29th Jan 2014
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Re: back-up
PoetSpeak
28th Jan 2014 11:59pm
I like this.
short and direct
can feel that slap
Well done
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re: Re: back-up
0913338
(Semaj)
29th Jan 2014 5:07am
trying my pen-hand with something new, glad you liked the word smack
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Re: on your knees
LobodeSanPedro
29th Jan 2014 1:33am
powerful use of the medium and form!
Bravo!
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re: Re: on your knees
0913338
(Semaj)
29th Jan 2014 5:10am
so such kind praise from a poem slap,
slap thank you slap non slap sincerely
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Re: on your knees
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
(DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
29th Jan 2014 2:38pm
smack-me-down
on
thee upstroke...........+A
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Re: on my knees
rnabokov
30th Jan 2014 12:31pm
So much said, and so perfectly felt
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