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bullfrogs still gather
eventide breeze coats their backs
mountain dew their tongues
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LobodeSanPedro
Published
28th Jan 2014
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
28th Jan 2014 6:40pm
A beautiful haiku, smoothe and delicate your wording.
eventide ... love the word.
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LobodeSanPedro
29th Jan 2014 9:06am
Thank you Miss Chi ... Like you I'm often taken with certain words and the melody they seem to carry
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rain1courtel
(RainC)
28th Jan 2014 9:42pm
ahhh.... the beauty of your haiku. :)
You do this form of poetry masterfully, Pedro...Xo
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LobodeSanPedro
29th Jan 2014 9:10am
Thank you for your too kind words Rain ... I had reason to head down to the Carolinas recently and recalled the old frogs under my grandmother's steps
xoxo
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DarkEnchantress
28th Jan 2014 11:02pm
I could truly feel twilight's tranquility within this piece, my Friend!
I bow to a master....of the Haiku!
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LobodeSanPedro
29th Jan 2014 9:15am
Your praise is quite humbling ... I'm studying Richard Wright's haiku poems and Basho - those are true masters, nonetheless I appreciate your vote of confidence
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