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Gone
So I am alone then, here in our house;
a moment of solitude at last.
It's thankfully hard to miss you,
anger is better than pain.
Fleeting kiss and farewell.
Your scent still lingers,
as do your tears;
but it's done.
Finished.
Gone.
a moment of solitude at last.
It's thankfully hard to miss you,
anger is better than pain.
Fleeting kiss and farewell.
Your scent still lingers,
as do your tears;
but it's done.
Finished.
Gone.
Published 27th Jan 2014
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27th Jan 2014 00:26am
Haha, did you kill him? Just kidding, nice poem. I like how the length of the lines decline in a neat stairwell moderation. :).
27th Jan 2014 00:34am
Hahahahaaaa no he still lives. :-)
Aaw thank you for the compliment, it's my attempt at a Reversed Etheree...
Aaw thank you for the compliment, it's my attempt at a Reversed Etheree...
27th Jan 2014 1:43am
Mmm wow yes solitude is always a good thing it allows you to soul search and push out the pain tht anger replaces making easier to get over. Beautiful write
27th Jan 2014 11:25am
Agreed. Sometimes a person cannot get that much needed time out, so when it comes, hard as it may be, it is the universes way of telling you to breathe.
When a partner has to leave often, sometimes the couple's defence mechanism becomes anger. Unhealthy as it may seem, anger is easy.
Thank you for the compliment and understanding. :-)
When a partner has to leave often, sometimes the couple's defence mechanism becomes anger. Unhealthy as it may seem, anger is easy.
Thank you for the compliment and understanding. :-)
