Beaten

I really pray that you're using metaphors babe. Because the feelings bad enough to know you feel this. It better be metaphors..XO

Let's just say verbal abuse hurts worse!Thank you Twitch for reading me. XO

Tommie continues to let us in on her many worlds.
Real or not, this is powerful writing from one of DUP'S finest Write Stars.

Impressive write

xo

Thanks for reading PS, your words are always welcome.I appreciate it.

well then

:)

Very Nice :)

Thank you Brinda. :)

Ye olde this is gonna hurt me more than you ...always has and always will be a load of bullshit! When someone beats another there is no love there it is all selfishness.

I am so glad, Tommie, that you're learning how love should feel :)

Well done!

Thank you GW, I appreciate your words and you reading me.Always value your opinion.

The way you wrote this is the pure archetype of how no one should never be made to feel.

One word dropping to the next, sinking to that thought "I deserved it so I let it happen" flooded me with emotion, silenced me, and brought back my own childhood abuse and how I accepted what others told he as my own identity. It took over two decades for me to pull myself out of my addiction to self-hatred, and sometimes I still find myself looking into the abyss and watching it stare back at me (to paraphrase Nietzsche).

I didn't really know how to start a reading list on DUP, but now I do.

...abuse covering one's heart in so much hurt that one believes he/she deserves it: God I know that feeling on such an intimate level.

Sometimes words hurt so much more than physical abuse, sometimes!I'm sorry you went through abuse as a child.I hear about that happening now as an adult/parent and it just makes me irate! No child should go through that.Thank you for reading and the RL add..I appreciate it very much Jswiss.

Of all your pieces, I've connected to this one. Everyone takes different coping mechanisms; sometimes it takes a different soul to bring about the light. x

Your words are very touching Heart, I thank you very much. :)

If you were beaten, n it was possible to get ahold of the ASS who beat you, I'd make him lick ur shoes AFTER I beat HIS ass! sorry shit like this pisses me off! U Expressed powerfully a very dark subject

Much appreciated Poetikmind.,thank you for reading.

With common words you wrote a beautiful and very erotic piece, Tommie.

It is also quite obvious for me that words hurt more than physical violence, but it seems that many people put body above everything..

Thank you Celini, appreciate you reading me.

Getting beating hurts whether physical or mental it hurts but one never deserves to have tht happen this isn't love but this is sadly beautiful i felt every pain. I too was abused for 7 yrs i allowed to happen then i opened my eyes n knew tht love doesn't to be this way. Deep write

I'm  so sorry to hear that BS.I thank you so much for your words. :)