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Thank you
Did you really leave these gifts for me, baby?
If you did, I want to thank you my love for your sweet surprises.
I love my mistletoe perfume, my beautiful woven black belt
and the grey tank top that fits me so well.
Not to mention the trail of books I keep finding.
I know you show your love with these gestures and I
love receiving these little treasures from you.
I love you very deeply as you know, and just wanted to say thank you
with this little poem..... <3
If you did, I want to thank you my love for your sweet surprises.
I love my mistletoe perfume, my beautiful woven black belt
and the grey tank top that fits me so well.
Not to mention the trail of books I keep finding.
I know you show your love with these gestures and I
love receiving these little treasures from you.
I love you very deeply as you know, and just wanted to say thank you
with this little poem..... <3
Published 23rd Jan 2014
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23rd Jan 2014 6:34am
Awesome lil ink sweets!!
Well written!!
Should be on a card!!
Sir Lancelott
Well written!!
Should be on a card!!
Sir Lancelott
23rd Jan 2014 6:37am
23rd Jan 2014 6:51am
23rd Jan 2014 7:00am
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2014 7:53am
Awe! Beautiful write from a beautiful heart and soul. Enjoyed. :)
24th Jan 2014 1:32am
24th Jan 2014 3:40am
lovely thank you
I gave a gift
a dry rose
from a book's pages
stacked years ago
i suppose
by a librarian
no thanks came
and saddened me
you at least
thank them
I gave a gift
a dry rose
from a book's pages
stacked years ago
i suppose
by a librarian
no thanks came
and saddened me
you at least
thank them
24th Jan 2014 6:51pm
As soon as I became aware of the secret gifts I wanted to thank this person for their love and thoughtfulness....
it took me awhile to connect the dots that in fact I did have a secret admirerer who was leaving gifts for me..... :)
In your case maybe she just did not connect the dots yet... <3
it took me awhile to connect the dots that in fact I did have a secret admirerer who was leaving gifts for me..... :)
In your case maybe she just did not connect the dots yet... <3
24th Jan 2014 8:22pm
5th Feb 2014 6:31am
5th Feb 2014 7:43am
Thank you for thinking my little poem "sweet".....
I hope he got to read it and realizes how much his secretly placed surprise gifts mean to me..... :)
I hope he got to read it and realizes how much his secretly placed surprise gifts mean to me..... :)
