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wanting more
your mouth is sublimely sensual
your lips invite me home
your embrace pulls me in
and leaves me wanting more
your lips invite me home
your embrace pulls me in
and leaves me wanting more
Published 22nd Jan 2014
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22nd Jan 2014 1:24pm
22nd Jan 2014 1:26pm
22nd Jan 2014 2:30pm
the way the lines flow, it reads as if "home" and "more" rhyme. I really like this one.
22nd Jan 2014 2:32pm
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2014 4:39pm
Short to the point, less is more and this displays that notion very well.
22nd Jan 2014 4:40pm
22nd Jan 2014 8:02pm
22nd Jan 2014 8:07pm
22nd Jan 2014 8:16pm
..nothing like a touch or kiss that breeds passion that lingers, yearning...Xo
Very nice luv...Xo
Very nice luv...Xo
22nd Jan 2014 8:24pm
