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The Five Sences

I listen to the rain faling all around me,
I listen to the rain.
I listen to the cries that surround me,
I listen to the cries.
I listen to the screaming inside me,
I listen to the screaming.

I feel the razor sinking deeper,
I feel the razor.
I feel the cold envading my wound,
I feel the cold.
I feel the blood streem down my arms,
I feel the blood.

I taste the tears escaping my eyes,
I taste the tears.
I taste the vomit catching in my throat,
I taste the vomit.
I taste the copper liquid between clenched teeth,
I taste the copper.

I see the shadows passsing through me,
I see the shadows.
I see the darkness closing in on me.
I see the darkness.
I see the monster that comes for the soul,
I see the monster.

I smell the fear rising up in me,
I smell the fear.
I smell the stench of rotting flesh,
I smell the stench.
I smell the breath of the beast before it devours me,
I smell the breath.

Written by UnDeRcOvErAnGeL (Asguard)
Published | Edited 23rd Feb 2011
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