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I want to be a chapter in
his book, no, I want to be
his book
Wanting his hands to rub
my smooth surface and
along my spine
Feeling his eyes search me
like he wants to read
me over and over
And when he opens me up
and brings me close
to his face to inhale me to
smell me his eyes will
close while he breathes
softly
Every moment I spend inside
myself I'm covered with
thoughts of him
Shut in between the pages
every letter is a part of
me written to him
I want him to read a few
pages and lay me upon
his chest
In that moment he lives
out my unpredictable yet
exciting words
Letting my pages fall where
they may, some blank so he
can add his story to the end
his book, no, I want to be
his book
Wanting his hands to rub
my smooth surface and
along my spine
Feeling his eyes search me
like he wants to read
me over and over
And when he opens me up
and brings me close
to his face to inhale me to
smell me his eyes will
close while he breathes
softly
Every moment I spend inside
myself I'm covered with
thoughts of him
Shut in between the pages
every letter is a part of
me written to him
I want him to read a few
pages and lay me upon
his chest
In that moment he lives
out my unpredictable yet
exciting words
Letting my pages fall where
they may, some blank so he
can add his story to the end
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This is so damn sweet Tommie Lynn. And creative to boot. I'll read you with pleasure my love. You can be my daily diary. XO
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20th Jan 2014 4:52am
Oh, I like that TS.You know I always love when you read me.I thank you for your words love. XO
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20th Jan 2014 4:58am
beautifully creative read
u make me feel
I know nothing
that's why i read
wish I was one
page in your books
that causes rage
some one will slide over mine
and tear me apart
as a book mark
sorry for making you answer every comment
you may gloss over this
if u wish
u make me feel
I know nothing
that's why i read
wish I was one
page in your books
that causes rage
some one will slide over mine
and tear me apart
as a book mark
sorry for making you answer every comment
you may gloss over this
if u wish
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20th Jan 2014 5:03am
I'm glad you can feel it A.
Even a book mark makes
it's way into a book once
in awhile. I'm sure you'll
find your book.Thank you
for your words.
Even a book mark makes
it's way into a book once
in awhile. I'm sure you'll
find your book.Thank you
for your words.
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20th Jan 2014 5:09am
i am no poet laurette
but a simple poet
composed thousands of poems
on various sites
these last few years
no tears in my eyes
i compose
and then to the garbage bin of time
i dispose
perhaps that's where
we all finally have to seek
a repose
thanks for being such a poetic friend
i shall read you
till from here
i descend
good night amen
but a simple poet
composed thousands of poems
on various sites
these last few years
no tears in my eyes
i compose
and then to the garbage bin of time
i dispose
perhaps that's where
we all finally have to seek
a repose
thanks for being such a poetic friend
i shall read you
till from here
i descend
good night amen
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20th Jan 2014 2:20pm
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20th Jan 2014 9:04pm
"I wanna be a chapter your book, no I wanna be the book you read" GOD, that's soooooo freaking awesome!!
Damn Tommie can you write any sweeter!? :) love it my dear...
Damn Tommie can you write any sweeter!? :) love it my dear...
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20th Jan 2014 11:32pm
making a withdrawal from Tommie's library. it's all about passion here, the whole story...
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21st Jan 2014 7:27pm
"I want him to read a few
pages and lay me upon
his chest"
Wow, sweetheart great write!
pages and lay me upon
his chest"
Wow, sweetheart great write!
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21st Jan 2014 11:10pm
Wow nice Tommie Lynn never judge a book by its cover and the fact tht ur to be red page by page is awesome
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