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Let me tell you how I want it
Does it make me bad to want to be dominated
to want to feel each bead on the string as it's
pulled from my ass, while tied up
Would it be twisted and sick if I enjoyed the
cold steel of the blade as it sliced my inner
thigh letting pleasure and pain combine
My need for torture is strong, hurt me the way
I want to be hurt, punish me like I'm your
personal whore
Can you handle me?My traumatic life holds
the scars, I'm not airbrushed I'm dark, fuck
me hard, make me bleed
Open my wounds, use my mouth as a cock
holster, pull my bound hands behind me
as leverage, fuck that peek a boo hole
Tear into me like a wild animal tears into
it's freshly killed carcass, lick my moist slit
while I fuck your face
Maybe I'm fucked up, maybe I'm normal
it doesn't matter, I like it, and you accept
it,together we keep each other innocent
to want to feel each bead on the string as it's
pulled from my ass, while tied up
Would it be twisted and sick if I enjoyed the
cold steel of the blade as it sliced my inner
thigh letting pleasure and pain combine
My need for torture is strong, hurt me the way
I want to be hurt, punish me like I'm your
personal whore
Can you handle me?My traumatic life holds
the scars, I'm not airbrushed I'm dark, fuck
me hard, make me bleed
Open my wounds, use my mouth as a cock
holster, pull my bound hands behind me
as leverage, fuck that peek a boo hole
Tear into me like a wild animal tears into
it's freshly killed carcass, lick my moist slit
while I fuck your face
Maybe I'm fucked up, maybe I'm normal
it doesn't matter, I like it, and you accept
it,together we keep each other innocent
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Re: Let me tell you how I want it
Anonymous
19th Jan 2014 9:27pm
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re: Re: Let me tell you how I want it
19th Jan 2014 10:09pm
Re: Let me tell you how I want it
19th Jan 2014 9:41pm
Omgoodnes...so raw and innocent at the exact same time...whew! As long as your loved the way you are...thats all that matters...very sexy and loving Tommie...
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re: Re: Let me tell you how I want it
19th Jan 2014 10:10pm
Re: Let me tell you how I want it
19th Jan 2014 9:49pm
Extremely pure.
Sexual pain at it's finest.
Loved the power and the frenzy.
With admiration.
xo
Speak
Sexual pain at it's finest.
Loved the power and the frenzy.
With admiration.
xo
Speak
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re: Re: Let me tell you how I want it
19th Jan 2014 10:11pm
Re: Let me tell you how I want it
20th Jan 2014 1:53am
My dear Tommie Lynn. We speak the same tongue babe. Let's talk. Passionate ink TL. All the way. XO
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re: Re: Let me tell you how I want it
20th Jan 2014 2:07am
It's always nice to know I'm not the only one!Anytime Twitch, thanks for reading and I appreciate your words love. XO
Re: Let me tell you how I want it
20th Jan 2014 2:41am
cold steel of the blade as it sliced my inner
thigh letting pleasure and pain combine
why cold ?
if its erect
it has to be vibratory hot
use my mouth as a cock
holster,===but
this is really creative
how did u conceive it?
thigh letting pleasure and pain combine
why cold ?
if its erect
it has to be vibratory hot
use my mouth as a cock
holster,===but
this is really creative
how did u conceive it?
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re: re: Re: Let me tell you how I want it
20th Jan 2014 3:24am
U r explicit
as upon your mouth
the guys''' sits .....
sucking in all of it
warms my cockles
all women love to extract the juice
as u 2 do
and
for the poetic orgasmic pleasure
thank you
in equal measure
having a cock is a pleasure
giving it is loving
to part with ones treasure
more cum shall come as gifted
at leisure
what an invaluable treasure
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20th Jan 2014 3:26am
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20th Jan 2014 4:07am
even though i am not on ur list
well i read the ones
worth a read
ur such a one lady
well i read the ones
worth a read
ur such a one lady
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Re: Let me tell you how I want it
20th Jan 2014 7:35am
Raw, intense and oh so specific :) Well done Tommie! I'll have bead dreams for awhile :D
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re: Re: Let me tell you how I want it
20th Jan 2014 2:08pm
Re: Let me tell you how I want it
Anonymous
20th Jan 2014 2:28pm
dats tellin it in da purist sens of da werd!
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re: Re: Let me tell you how I want it
20th Jan 2014 2:35pm
Re: Let me tell you how I want it
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Jan 2014 8:12pm
20th Jan 2014 8:11pm
Somehow I'm hungry for steak now. Seriously though, love that last stanza:
"it doesn't matter, I like it, and you accept
it, together we keep each other innocent"
You've captured the beauty of sexual desire: no matter what form, always innocent between two lovers. Bravo my friend!
"it doesn't matter, I like it, and you accept
it, together we keep each other innocent"
You've captured the beauty of sexual desire: no matter what form, always innocent between two lovers. Bravo my friend!
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re: Re: Let me tell you how I want it
20th Jan 2014 11:57pm
Mmmm steak!!
I'm happy you liked it M, I always value your opinion. Thank you.
I'm happy you liked it M, I always value your opinion. Thank you.
Re: Let me tell you how I want it
21st Jan 2014 8:44pm
This is eccentric, Much like the young lady in the ink. To feel beyond what most only dream of. The passion of such should never be questioned.
Hot write
Hot write
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re: Re: Let me tell you how I want it
21st Jan 2014 8:54pm
Re: Let me tell you how I want it
21st Jan 2014 11:39pm
This is a beautiful dark love of one who's desires burn to the point tht it set your soul free and be love the way u live to be. This is wildly beautiful
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re: Re: Let me tell you how I want it
22nd Jan 2014 00:22am
Thank you kindly, your words humble me.I am glad you liked it and thank you for the RL add.