deepundergroundpoetry.com
Suicidal Thoughts
Suicidal Thoughts
Running through my mind like a nigga running from the cops.
Knife to my wrist, pressed oh so tightly.
Watching the blood drip down as the pain drips away.
No one to love, no one to love me.
All there is to do is to think that suicidal shit.
Suicidal thoughts.
Running through my veins like a nigga shot up on heroin.
Like a nigga fening for dope.
I'm fening for hope.
The smell of gasoline filling my nose up.
Smoke starts to hug my lungs.
I didn't think I could feel so free of misery.
As I watch the pain and memories burn away.
I think to my self...man what a day.
With nothing more to say.
I sit and wait.
For the suicidal thoughts to disintegrate.
-Tyler Duhon
Running through my mind like a nigga running from the cops.
Knife to my wrist, pressed oh so tightly.
Watching the blood drip down as the pain drips away.
No one to love, no one to love me.
All there is to do is to think that suicidal shit.
Suicidal thoughts.
Running through my veins like a nigga shot up on heroin.
Like a nigga fening for dope.
I'm fening for hope.
The smell of gasoline filling my nose up.
Smoke starts to hug my lungs.
I didn't think I could feel so free of misery.
As I watch the pain and memories burn away.
I think to my self...man what a day.
With nothing more to say.
I sit and wait.
For the suicidal thoughts to disintegrate.
-Tyler Duhon
Published 15th Feb 2011
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 0
reading list entries 0
comments 3
reads 1168
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
15th Feb 2011 2:05am
Even though I don't agree with all of the analogies here, I still like the last line. "I sit and await. For the suicidal thoughts to disintegrate."
Maybe changing *await to *wait might sound better, but it's your call.
Maybe changing *await to *wait might sound better, but it's your call.
15th Feb 2011 10:16pm
Yeah I see your point. I'm new to this, lol. So I'm really not use of this just yet. But thanks for your opinion. helps out alot.
Anonymous
12th Apr 2011 11:01am
<< post removed >>
