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life coach
souls
even old ones
do not know
of age
or containers
evolution
does not stop
to evaluate
its elevation
empathy
reaches everywhere
but the around
of its own
patted back
light
is living extension
and can't be confined
in the labor camps of ego
the flower
will never know
it's an anarchist
even old ones
do not know
of age
or containers
evolution
does not stop
to evaluate
its elevation
empathy
reaches everywhere
but the around
of its own
patted back
light
is living extension
and can't be confined
in the labor camps of ego
the flower
will never know
it's an anarchist
Published 16th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
16th Jan 2014 12:46pm
Brava!!! Phenomenal.
16th Jan 2014 1:22pm
16th Jan 2014 3:02pm
"empathy
reaches everywhere
but the around
of its own
patted back " Strong line here! Thanks for sharing!
reaches everywhere
but the around
of its own
patted back " Strong line here! Thanks for sharing!
16th Jan 2014 4:29pm
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Anonymous
16th Jan 2014 8:05pm
dun wryte
16th Jan 2014 9:10pm
"coach", pardon my (here it comes, I can't stop it and am cringing at it's inevitability (unlike the anarchist flower that burst and petal drops with equal detachment)i am weak to cry at such zen, but the green vein to red bud birthing, the sex of bees buzzing to satiate the hunger of the queen (these things affect me terribly) bad sports cliché alert, well and but, your NOT you was in the ZONE on this one, and for a moment, my light body, rev rev rev almost caught the teethy flywheel of eternity and motor roared my physical into the ethereal...iwill be looking at more of your audibles coach (can i be both football fan and romantique) from the organic playbook of your reveries
17th Jan 2014 12:01pm
Psshh... I ain't gonna ruin that beautiful comment, with anything other then saying thank you. A very big thank you!
