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Measure of a man
in the darkness of near dawn
I lie beside you, I have yet to sleep,
still feeling your lips on my skin
as you breathe rythmically next to me
your kiss is incendiary, your body
a work of the finest art
but no matter how incredibly alive
I feel while making love to your body
I've actually fallen so much harder
for your indomitable heart
I lie beside you, I have yet to sleep,
still feeling your lips on my skin
as you breathe rythmically next to me
your kiss is incendiary, your body
a work of the finest art
but no matter how incredibly alive
I feel while making love to your body
I've actually fallen so much harder
for your indomitable heart
Published 15th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2014 1:18pm
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15th Jan 2014 5:45pm
just because I said that YOU personally suck does not mean that I ever said that I am good. Point me to one place where I ever said that I was better than anyone else, okay psycho?
And moreso than the issue of you sucking at poetry is the fact that you pollute this site with your psychotic trash. You are ruining this site.
And moreso than the issue of you sucking at poetry is the fact that you pollute this site with your psychotic trash. You are ruining this site.
15th Jan 2014 6:09pm
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2014 8:02pm
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15th Jan 2014 9:50pm
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15th Jan 2014 10:54pm
Anonymous
15th Jan 2014 10:27pm
Beautiful piece. Loved the build up - last line is an incredible close. Nicely done, Juon.
15th Jan 2014 10:56pm
Glad you enjoyed this, I know it is simple but at times simple works best to express something hard to get out.
15th Jan 2014 10:44pm
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