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'The Genesis of Being...'
The extraction
of
her visage
during the early morn' ritual
an homage to,
"belleza perfecta de amor"
drapes indelible tracks that
crisscross, as they wander through
the canals of isolated memories...
where upon islands
of emotions slow dances with thought
as it bares witness
to her succulent splendor...
shared duty
with each passing second
of her fragrant aroma
though
elusive her aura
left awestruck
as next victim
it claims
is no match...
all fall the same
when love...
whispers the soul's name
of
her visage
during the early morn' ritual
an homage to,
"belleza perfecta de amor"
drapes indelible tracks that
crisscross, as they wander through
the canals of isolated memories...
where upon islands
of emotions slow dances with thought
as it bares witness
to her succulent splendor...
shared duty
with each passing second
of her fragrant aroma
though
elusive her aura
left awestruck
as next victim
it claims
is no match...
all fall the same
when love...
whispers the soul's name
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Re: 'The Genesis of Being...'
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Jan 2014 5:14pm
13th Jan 2014 5:13pm
Ooooo! Luv those morning whispers for sure. Very sexy piece. Enjoyed the sensual of this. Good visual as well. :)
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re: Re: 'The Genesis of Being...'
13th Jan 2014 5:16pm
Thank FG you're a sweetie pie! I'm grateful as always for your continued support of my work :)
Re: 'The Genesis of Being...'
13th Jan 2014 5:37pm
you write one hell of a love poem, it even warms my jaded little heart.
très belle, Papi.
très belle, Papi.
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re: Re: 'The Genesis of Being...'
13th Jan 2014 5:49pm
Aaaawwww baby you heart is soooo full of love, you just seem to wanna discard that truth, but I know my sweet Mami is as sweet as honey I mean hey to proof is in the pudding, I think of you? N I get a TOOTHACHE lol n thank you :)
Re: 'The Genesis of Being...'
13th Jan 2014 6:05pm
re: Re: 'The Genesis of Being...'
13th Jan 2014 6:27pm
Lol he doesn't? well aren't you the best bro!
truly appreciate you always :) thank you!
truly appreciate you always :) thank you!
Re: 'The Genesis of Being...'
13th Jan 2014 6:08pm
...beautiful, tender, amazing, mesmerizing,....and all that other jazz.
Wonderfully written....Xo
Wonderfully written....Xo
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re: Re: 'The Genesis of Being...'
13th Jan 2014 6:30pm
N " let sweet Rain pour down pon me"
:) thank you! Appreciate you truly n always :)
:) thank you! Appreciate you truly n always :)
Re: 'The Genesis of Being...'
Anonymous
13th Jan 2014 10:54pm
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re: Re: 'The Genesis of Being...'
14th Jan 2014 5:14am
Lol yea me too! lol
But truly, your comments n support are always a blessing n I appreciate it greatly bro. Thank u :)
But truly, your comments n support are always a blessing n I appreciate it greatly bro. Thank u :)
Re: 'The Genesis of Being...'
14th Jan 2014 6:15am
re: Re: 'The Genesis of Being...'
14th Jan 2014 1:27pm
Thank you my sweet Rose :) I truly appreciate your time n thoughts on my ink n your continued support :)