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Ocean
Her name carried on the misty ocean foam
The wind whips up on the moors echoing her name
Ocean waves will bring her to him
Wild in nature she reaches him with a wet airy kiss
Her spirit flys through to his soul
She tattoos her name on his heart
Listening to the sea
He takes a deep breath
Collapsing into her soft body
Her embrace is sensuous
He wanted her touch forever
She wanted to calm his storm
Their love crossed the ocean
This would be the start of a new beginning
The wind whips up on the moors echoing her name
Ocean waves will bring her to him
Wild in nature she reaches him with a wet airy kiss
Her spirit flys through to his soul
She tattoos her name on his heart
Listening to the sea
He takes a deep breath
Collapsing into her soft body
Her embrace is sensuous
He wanted her touch forever
She wanted to calm his storm
Their love crossed the ocean
This would be the start of a new beginning
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Re: Ocean
12th Jan 2014 5:41am
Ooh bravo wht a sweet piece. This reminds me of many times I would travel to New Hampshire to visit my relatives there by the shore and reading this has a me mesmerized
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12th Jan 2014 6:16am
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12th Jan 2014 5:52am
This has brought to mind a tumultuous relationship, a sea that promises to be softer, kinder, quieter, if only you'd slip into its embrace.
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12th Jan 2014 6:19am
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12th Jan 2014 5:59am
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12th Jan 2014 6:20am
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12th Jan 2014 7:24am
The ocean is a great unifier...it's beautiful to imagine the journey of each wave. Beautiful write, Tommie!
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12th Jan 2014 2:40pm
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12th Jan 2014 8:39am
this is a romantic & thrilling scene, Tommie: the stormy shore, rolling waves, reunited lovers. the sailor home at last...
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12th Jan 2014 2:41pm
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12th Jan 2014 2:28pm
Echo John Feddeler. Favourite lines:
Her spirit flies through to his soul
She tattoos her name on his heart
He wanted her touch forever
She wanted to calm his storm
Her spirit flies through to his soul
She tattoos her name on his heart
He wanted her touch forever
She wanted to calm his storm
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12th Jan 2014 9:14pm
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12th Jan 2014 8:47pm
breathtaking for word by word nicely done there Tommie :) especially the tattoos part
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13th Jan 2014 11:40am
You have a way that speaks to me deep Tommie Lynn. You make the ocean feel small. XO
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13th Jan 2014 11:58am
Re: Ocean
10th Jul 2015 3:19pm
The random buttom brought me this lovely poem.
I can feel the mist, it's refreshing ; )
I can feel the mist, it's refreshing ; )
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10th Jul 2015 8:30pm