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I found her in darkness
Surrounded
Light evades
Her eyes a portal ruled by shades of grey
My entrance alludes to memories of yesterday
She spoke: 'I'm cold when touched,my whispers won't offer much.stay if you please,I won't notice you leave.my heart is a grave full of misery and spades'
Her words a hidden treasure in a master piece lit ablaze
In the shadows I walk amongst the ruins of this crepuscule maze
Confounding as time capturing moments destined to fade.
Surrounded
Light evades
Her eyes a portal ruled by shades of grey
My entrance alludes to memories of yesterday
She spoke: 'I'm cold when touched,my whispers won't offer much.stay if you please,I won't notice you leave.my heart is a grave full of misery and spades'
Her words a hidden treasure in a master piece lit ablaze
In the shadows I walk amongst the ruins of this crepuscule maze
Confounding as time capturing moments destined to fade.
Published 10th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2014 6:26pm
This struck a nerve....I felt this more than I can say. Great emotions in this one. :)
11th Jan 2014 7:43pm
Thank you.
I was giving motivation at the time.
I must ask though,is that a good or a bad thing,the striking of a nerve?
I was giving motivation at the time.
I must ask though,is that a good or a bad thing,the striking of a nerve?
