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Murder.
The Lying, conniving, heartless souls.
The Stupid, dumbfounded families, behold.
The incredulous, lost, petite little child.
Found by the conniving devious wild.
He takes you, and brakes you.
He screams," QUIET DOWN."
He hurts you, and burns you.
He brings u underground.
He hits you, and beats you til the blood say "no more."
But he fails with his actions.
Step-by-step he follows his rules.
No screaming, no fighting, your loseing this duel.
He grabs you and bites you, then tells you "DONT YELL."
But, he's not the one who shall suffer.
Your family your friends, dont suspect such a thing.
While he sits there and watches you, he feels like a king.
Though the day you come back,
To taunt him, my dear.
Is the day that the justice of murder,
Is near.
The Stupid, dumbfounded families, behold.
The incredulous, lost, petite little child.
Found by the conniving devious wild.
He takes you, and brakes you.
He screams," QUIET DOWN."
He hurts you, and burns you.
He brings u underground.
He hits you, and beats you til the blood say "no more."
But he fails with his actions.
Step-by-step he follows his rules.
No screaming, no fighting, your loseing this duel.
He grabs you and bites you, then tells you "DONT YELL."
But, he's not the one who shall suffer.
Your family your friends, dont suspect such a thing.
While he sits there and watches you, he feels like a king.
Though the day you come back,
To taunt him, my dear.
Is the day that the justice of murder,
Is near.
Published 13th Feb 2011
| Edited 12th Sep 2012
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Anonymous
13th Feb 2011 1:02am
Lots of emotion?
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I like it.
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I like it.
13th Feb 2011 1:21am
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13th Feb 2011 2:18am
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17th Feb 2011 00:37am
the best poems i believe are the ones i can really be touched in emotion.to feel an the incounter with incoutering is amazing.but what do i know im only 13....
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26th Dec 2011 8:51pm
I just.. wow. I can't even with this one, pumpkin. It sounds like something I would write. I don't know whether to be proud or worried...
Heck, I'll be both. :)
Heck, I'll be both. :)
