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I Undress You.........
(".....I must be crazy standing in this place
but I'm feeling no disgrace for asking......")
Brenda Russell
There is a warmth in the room
the luminosity of the light's
orange glow
highlights your bright eyes
and shy smile.....
…...I undress you
I feel your uneasiness
as I loosen each button
of your gentle linen-silk blouse
and it floats from your shoulders
onto the floor.....
…....I wrap my arms around your body
sliding down the tapered zipper of your skirt
You put you head against my chest
as if you don't want me to
feel the hurt or shame
in your discomfort
as your finely tailored garment falls
I want to see more
...revealing your beautiful black lace bodice
accentuating the woman that your are inside
the woman that I hold in longing arms
My gentle, passionate kisses
serve reassurance that
you are "safe in the arms
of the one who loves you"
he that is your now
and ever present love
past and future shall never come to harm you....
…..my promise to you my love
My hands start at your lower back
tracing your spine slowly
loosening the two small clasp that release
your breast...they fall into my caress
so soft and warm
your breathless sigh, heart beating strongly, steadily
my oh my
this man's hands have never known such pleasure
Heaven must be like this.....
My fingertips
slip inside the waist of
your most personal wisp of black lace
stretching them across your hips
they settle to the floor....
…....pulling you closer to me
realizing like never before that
things will never be the same
never again will my lips speak
the same name....
.....and yes
we can never go back
only forward into a brand new day
That moment in our now
when I slipped inside
the comfort of your temple doors,
the merging of our two worlds
You became mine forever more.
Daring to look into each others souls
with brave new eyes........
…...cast not thy cares on that which has come before
You are my love, you are my heaven
admit no fear, no trepidation
just love....
"I will carry you baby....."
never hurt you
and never destroy
to build you up
never tear you down
an inevitable plight
that feels so damned right
.....I undress you
and I take your love for the
very first time
in that moment,
you become mine
Published 8th Jan 2014
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8th Jan 2014 2:28pm
My hands start at your lower back
tracing a path up your spine slowly
they find two small clasp that release
your breast...they fall into my caress
so soft and warm
your breathy sigh, heart beating strongly, steadily
my, my, my
my hands have never felt such joy
Heaven must be like this.....
My version
Body heated and numb
From your tender touch
That heats up the very core of my being
Whispering softly in your ear
Seducing your mind
As my tender lips
Brush against your neck
With no remembrance of my past I'm yours .
tracing a path up your spine slowly
they find two small clasp that release
your breast...they fall into my caress
so soft and warm
your breathy sigh, heart beating strongly, steadily
my, my, my
my hands have never felt such joy
Heaven must be like this.....
My version
Body heated and numb
From your tender touch
That heats up the very core of my being
Whispering softly in your ear
Seducing your mind
As my tender lips
Brush against your neck
With no remembrance of my past I'm yours .
10th Jan 2014 1:53pm
A finely told poem I like it.you write well leaving readers with their own thoughts.
10th Jan 2014 2:03pm
Thank you fine sir....I have also read a few of your poem as well. You are a very astute talent. : )
8th Jan 2014 3:08pm
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8th Jan 2014 3:45pm
8th Jan 2014 3:49pm
Why should a *man* treat a *woman* any other way Gracie? : )
Not even a fan but her song speaks to this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JtMUIwOE2ss : )
Not even a fan but her song speaks to this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JtMUIwOE2ss : )
8th Jan 2014 8:46pm
8th Jan 2014 4:00pm
trembling treasure wrapped in past paper that only true love could ever undress to be treasured again. Beautiful just beautiful.
8th Jan 2014 5:09pm
8th Jan 2014 8:43pm
I could see and almost feel this ink...
Simply beautiful! Your pen is romantic, sensual, incredible and all those other beautiful adjectives. I love it...Xoxo
Simply beautiful! Your pen is romantic, sensual, incredible and all those other beautiful adjectives. I love it...Xoxo
8th Jan 2014 8:47pm
You forgot an adjective......"inspired" ;)
Thank You for stopping by Ms. Rain. ( I was waiting on you....)
#myfirsttime
Thank You for stopping by Ms. Rain. ( I was waiting on you....)
#myfirsttime
9th Jan 2014 4:12am
this was totally captivating...so tender yet powerful..aint nothing like the comfort of safety in a lovers embrace..very intimate picture your words painted..Bravo!
fav line:
"Daring to look into each others souls
with brave new eyes" ahhh Lovely Ink Mr M
fav line:
"Daring to look into each others souls
with brave new eyes" ahhh Lovely Ink Mr M
9th Jan 2014 4:17am
Thank You beautiful *blue* Poet. love encompasses all things. Holding her makes me feel safe : )
9th Jan 2014 8:06am
10th Jan 2014 2:07pm
12th Jan 2014 00:31am
Love had a subheading called sensuality. Sensuality's champion is named Archie. All props to you, bro.
12th Jan 2014 1:50pm
