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1 dollar and 87 cents
It was much easier when I was just a number
just another nigga
hot juices
low fruit
go ahead
Pick on me
until you see
1 of many
freeze frame
snap shot
a moment captured in time
your mother crying
pillowcase
pillow
darkness dividing, Infinity
good luck with the great blue
ten yrs to boot
broke into
where
angels gather
never thought id see you
just another nigga
hot juices
low fruit
go ahead
Pick on me
until you see
1 of many
freeze frame
snap shot
a moment captured in time
your mother crying
pillowcase
pillow
darkness dividing, Infinity
good luck with the great blue
ten yrs to boot
broke into
where
angels gather
never thought id see you
Published 8th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
8th Jan 2014 7:36am
Interestingly written. Portrays many images to me.
8th Jan 2014 8:05am
this is a very tricky write...I read it once then again, thought I got it but a few more reads made me understand that i misunderstood it...hmmmmmm
i like the way it catches pace after that line 'pick on me'
very interesting and at the same time a very dark story hidden there ...good job
keep Rollin
cyanide..
i like the way it catches pace after that line 'pick on me'
very interesting and at the same time a very dark story hidden there ...good job
keep Rollin
cyanide..
Anonymous
8th Jan 2014 3:27pm
a slab of singin' meat rM
9th Jan 2014 00:45am
Cryptic Sir-You hold Your detailed secrets while still penning flow and that great ominous feeling of loss...this felt like watching all things good slip away while standing on the sidelines...Excellence always JR...You've really been refining Your Pens of late, You keep getting sharper!!!
9th Jan 2014 1:38am
Damn john I like it. You speaking it all here bro. Things can be easier with that number on ya back, but it also can come with them same deadly consequences. Cheers to ya.
