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Memorized moments
There's the moment
where the axis of earth
seems to cease movement
it's only for a second...
though in my mind the replay lasts...
and lats..
There's a moment where breathing
no longer feels needed..
Because my sustainment..
Is that moment.
There's a moment that I have memorized..
Etched into the inner depths of all of my cortexs'
It is this moment that
Invokes a warmth, internally deep
Creates the illusion of centered peace
Marks me with a recharged drive
It is this memorized moment..
It is what I hold on to...
It is what I have left of you.
where the axis of earth
seems to cease movement
it's only for a second...
though in my mind the replay lasts...
and lats..
There's a moment where breathing
no longer feels needed..
Because my sustainment..
Is that moment.
There's a moment that I have memorized..
Etched into the inner depths of all of my cortexs'
It is this moment that
Invokes a warmth, internally deep
Creates the illusion of centered peace
Marks me with a recharged drive
It is this memorized moment..
It is what I hold on to...
It is what I have left of you.
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Re: Memorized moments
6th Jan 2014 2:05pm
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6th Jan 2014 2:06pm
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6th Jan 2014 2:07pm
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6th Jan 2014 2:53pm
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6th Jan 2014 2:57pm
Re: Memorized moments
6th Jan 2014 7:01pm
Sometimes I find myself mentally saying, "WOW", after reading your work, shell.
Maybe it's because you don't share your incredible ink with us often, and when you do, it re-affirms just how talented you are.
hmmm....it's good to miss something that's amazing,....makes you appreciate it more when it returns.
*sorry, a ramble moment*
Beautiful ink hon...Xoxo
Maybe it's because you don't share your incredible ink with us often, and when you do, it re-affirms just how talented you are.
hmmm....it's good to miss something that's amazing,....makes you appreciate it more when it returns.
*sorry, a ramble moment*
Beautiful ink hon...Xoxo
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re: Re: Memorized moments
6th Jan 2014 9:01pm
Awww got me all humbled and emotional over here!! Thanks greatly and you can ramble whenever you'd like!!
Re: Memorized moments
9th Jan 2014 3:24am
this was Amazing!!
fav lines:
"There's a moment where breathing
no longer feels needed..
Because my sustainment..
Is that moment."
wow talk about being fully present and self aware..loved it
and the ending ties it all up fabulously..enjoyed
fav lines:
"There's a moment where breathing
no longer feels needed..
Because my sustainment..
Is that moment."
wow talk about being fully present and self aware..loved it
and the ending ties it all up fabulously..enjoyed
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9th Jan 2014 12:54pm
Re: Memorized moments
15th Jan 2014 8:36pm
"Creates the illusion of centered peace"; nice reflection on how the truth that we perceived may be transitory.
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re: Re: Memorized moments
16th Jan 2014 3:10pm
That illusion is sometimes what hold us! :) thanks as always for your astute observations!
Re: Memorized moments
31st Jan 2014 2:24pm
Your great writes have me thinking a lot sweets!!!!
Awesome read too Shell!!
Sir Lancelott
Awesome read too Shell!!
Sir Lancelott
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31st Jan 2014 7:05pm