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Friends or Partners
We gossip around and talk about people
But you come in bed with me and kiss
Friends or partners?
We go shopping together
But you tell me that you love me
Friends or partners?
You change in front of me.
Wow you look beautiful.
I want to touch
Friends or partners?
I stare at you thinking how beautiful you look
Friends or partners?
We tell each other our deepest secret
I'm lesbian and your bisexual
But we end up in bed together
Friends or partners?
But you come in bed with me and kiss
Friends or partners?
We go shopping together
But you tell me that you love me
Friends or partners?
You change in front of me.
Wow you look beautiful.
I want to touch
Friends or partners?
I stare at you thinking how beautiful you look
Friends or partners?
We tell each other our deepest secret
I'm lesbian and your bisexual
But we end up in bed together
Friends or partners?
Published 5th Jan 2014
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5th Jan 2014 9:57pm
5th Jan 2014 11:44pm
Anonymous
5th Jan 2014 10:08pm
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5th Jan 2014 11:45pm
2nd Feb 2014 8:34pm
I like this poem because it asks questions like ones that I have been asking. I am interested in different types of relationships, different ways of having love and affection.
I also like the way that you use the repeated line, 'friends or partners?' and at the end of the poem, this question is still not resolved.
I also like the way that you use the repeated line, 'friends or partners?' and at the end of the poem, this question is still not resolved.
19th Oct 2014 5:26am
