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Laze
Another lucrative year of waste
Sordid hours of tasteless taste
Quiet evening in stupor lay
Hung suspended in the new years day
With witty demurrals and ignorant chaste.
Sordid hours of tasteless taste
Quiet evening in stupor lay
Hung suspended in the new years day
With witty demurrals and ignorant chaste.
Published 4th Jan 2014
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4th Jan 2014 6:26pm
...but You did something here right?(Write)
Dig the roll of these words-Pen On 13!!!
Dig the roll of these words-Pen On 13!!!
20th Jan 2014 6:33pm
4th Jan 2014 8:31pm
just another one for the calendars...been there my friend...been there...
nice ink
nice ink
20th Jan 2014 6:33pm
5th Jan 2014 3:48am
Ignorant chaste... Ahh blueball poetry with a touch of self examination always hits a nerve for me. Good write with a lot packed in.
20th Jan 2014 6:34pm
Blueball... nvm
yes they're all ignorant if they can't wake up from themselves.
I'd probably be the one doing the shaking... thanks man.
yes they're all ignorant if they can't wake up from themselves.
I'd probably be the one doing the shaking... thanks man.
5th Jan 2014 4:49am
20th Jan 2014 6:35pm
5th Jan 2014 4:18pm
:) dude lighten the fuck up!!!!
just kidding, I totally get this piece
write on 13
just kidding, I totally get this piece
write on 13
20th Jan 2014 6:35pm
5th Jan 2014 11:56pm
20th Jan 2014 6:36pm
6th Jan 2014 4:25am
...you just need some weed and a real good lay.
...yeah, that should do it...o_O :) Xo
...yeah, that should do it...o_O :) Xo
20th Jan 2014 6:37pm
well weed is easy... the lay is not...
and i sure hope that does it... i'm gonna take your advice :P
and i sure hope that does it... i'm gonna take your advice :P
