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Fuck you
Yeah I said it FUCK YOU Im tired of all the you do
Treat me like shit no kindness not a bit.
You swear, you cheat,my emotions you depleat.
You just dont care, taking more than your fair share.
Just leave me alone so the breaks can be sewn.
I cant find the strength to walk away,
cant seem to stray.
Even when you leave,
you come right back
I fall it even when I know what you lack.
I should of stayed away when you were gone
Treat me like shit no kindness not a bit.
You swear, you cheat,my emotions you depleat.
You just dont care, taking more than your fair share.
Just leave me alone so the breaks can be sewn.
I cant find the strength to walk away,
cant seem to stray.
Even when you leave,
you come right back
I fall it even when I know what you lack.
I should of stayed away when you were gone
Published 11th Feb 2011
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20th Nov 2011 3:17am
I like this poem, the anger and raw emotions are real but,
This should've been either in the Anger/Love section.
I think you should've went more into detail of what she did to you
Ummm think that's about it :D
Overall I loved this poem :D
Keep writing!
This should've been either in the Anger/Love section.
I think you should've went more into detail of what she did to you
Ummm think that's about it :D
Overall I loved this poem :D
Keep writing!
7th Aug 2012 1:12am
SOME GOOD EMOTION AND DESCRIPTIVE MOTES. save the punctuation!!!!! allow the words to dictate the pace! some hard english in places n kinda drifted a bit @ the end... still a good read! keep grindin!
