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No worries
Don't you worry your little heart.
Nothing will ever make us part.
Til we die and even past.
Our love will truly last.
Relationship like no other.
We share great love with one another.
Although we were born separate years.
I'll express my love until everyone hears.
I am so very lucky to have you.
And I always mean it when I say I love you.
One day soon I hope to make you my wife.
And We will grow old together, and live a happy life.
Nothing will ever make us part.
Til we die and even past.
Our love will truly last.
Relationship like no other.
We share great love with one another.
Although we were born separate years.
I'll express my love until everyone hears.
I am so very lucky to have you.
And I always mean it when I say I love you.
One day soon I hope to make you my wife.
And We will grow old together, and live a happy life.
Published 3rd Jan 2014
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This one is better, however, constant ABAB tend to make love poems a bit cheesy. Also, I don't understand the line "til we die and even past", I'm not sure what that means...'even past' Aside from that, this is a good poem, just not a good format. Try re-working in some more lines and change the rhyme scheme! Hope this helps! :)
15th Jan 2014 7:32pm
There is sincerity in this poem, a rare ingredient in DUP If you desire help and advice, seek these outside DUP.
