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Senryu 5-7-5 (2014-01-02)
Delight of deep love
All my thoughts for my soulmate
My heart beats strongly
Published 2nd Jan 2014
| Edited 14th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
2nd Jan 2014 11:46am
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2nd Jan 2014 11:54am
You are very nice Gabriel, more and more, I love this form of poetry! Thank you for your comment!
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2014 3:02am
Lovely sweet sentiments... you're getting good at this!
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3rd Jan 2014 8:53am
You're into them, too :-). Amazing! I love your lines since they are deep and dense and full of emotion!
3rd Jan 2014 9:22am
Thank you so much, Miss Chi for your comment, a great honor for me to be read by you!
