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To refrain...
Held back as I am,
I must refrain from touching
you
with these broken jagged
pieces of me.
You’ll be cut and stained
and I’ll spend eternity
drowning in
the guilt of what I’ve
done to you.
I must refrain from touching
you
with these broken jagged
pieces of me.
You’ll be cut and stained
and I’ll spend eternity
drowning in
the guilt of what I’ve
done to you.
Published 31st Dec 2013
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1st Jan 2014 11:36am
there was a song that said: 'only love can break a heart, only love can mend it again.'
so you see, your pieces are repairable...
so you see, your pieces are repairable...
9th Jan 2014 6:37am
So they are, I just need to find a furnace hot enough to remold them. Thank you for stopping by.
1st Jan 2014 6:40pm
This is beautiful sparse writing - its prickly, stuttered structure suits it well
9th Jan 2014 6:37am
1st Jan 2014 11:56pm
Succinctly stated perfection. You've said so much with so very little. This. Yes.
9th Jan 2014 6:38am
9th Jan 2014 7:28am
I remember seeing this, it must have been on facebook cause I was sure I commented, ill tell you again anyway that I absolutely Love it!
9th Jan 2014 7:34am
