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Stayed anyway
I thought you were the most
beautiful creature,
the way you smelled like
you knew all my terrible secrets
and the way you touched
my hand anyway, like
it was perfectly okay
not to be perfect
and then you got even more
beautiful when you laid down
on my bed for the first time
with your hipbones pointing toward
the ceiling that i had stared at
so many nights when i couldnt sleep,
and the curve of your back tickling
the bed sheets i had lain in
night after night
fearing they would never be touched by
another body, and you
were surrounded by so much of me
you smelled my pillow and
looked at the pictures on my wall
and you smiled because you knew
all my terrible secrets and you
stayed anyway.
beautiful creature,
the way you smelled like
you knew all my terrible secrets
and the way you touched
my hand anyway, like
it was perfectly okay
not to be perfect
and then you got even more
beautiful when you laid down
on my bed for the first time
with your hipbones pointing toward
the ceiling that i had stared at
so many nights when i couldnt sleep,
and the curve of your back tickling
the bed sheets i had lain in
night after night
fearing they would never be touched by
another body, and you
were surrounded by so much of me
you smelled my pillow and
looked at the pictures on my wall
and you smiled because you knew
all my terrible secrets and you
stayed anyway.
Published 30th Dec 2013
| Edited 8th Jan 2014
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30th Dec 2013 11:15pm
8th Jan 2014 2:41am
30th Dec 2013 11:50pm
8th Jan 2014 2:42am
31st Dec 2013 4:17am
well expressed ode to someone who sees the beauty in you that you yourself fail to recognize...
3rd Jan 2014 4:04am
8th Jan 2014 2:42am
1st Jan 2014 10:55am
3rd Jan 2014 4:04am
2nd Jan 2014 6:20pm
And that is what matters, the person chose to stay anyway.
A beautiful message in your words Blackrose. :)
A beautiful message in your words Blackrose. :)
3rd Jan 2014 4:05am
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2014 6:22pm
A real testament to unconditional acceptance. Well done, Blackrose!
3rd Jan 2014 4:06am
12th Jan 2014 00:41am
beautiful poetry
at 18
when were u first laden
ur now no maiden
well experienced
enjoyed urs
though he was the one
i only love poetic cum
at 18
when were u first laden
ur now no maiden
well experienced
enjoyed urs
though he was the one
i only love poetic cum
