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9th Feb 2011 9:30pm
This poem would make for a great wall at the end of a hall of a holacost (sp?) museam where the visitors have been through endless hallways of horror. Then, they see the poem with light shining through from the other side and maybe exit immediately to a beautiful garden.
On the other hand: A more real approach to life is to never give up because we are "Caught in the self-centered dream - only suffering...each moment, life as it is, the only teacher..." Never give up, not because things will get better, but because life as it is is all we've got.
On the other hand: A more real approach to life is to never give up because we are "Caught in the self-centered dream - only suffering...each moment, life as it is, the only teacher..." Never give up, not because things will get better, but because life as it is is all we've got.
9th Feb 2011 9:39pm
yes i understand where you coming from and i hold strong similar opinions and understand exactly what you mean.
this poem i kept short and 'not too indepth'because i wanted a simple message to lie within the image... and it was made to help a friend who was going through a rough time. however thank you for your lovely comment. all feedback to me is always greatly appreciated
this poem i kept short and 'not too indepth'because i wanted a simple message to lie within the image... and it was made to help a friend who was going through a rough time. however thank you for your lovely comment. all feedback to me is always greatly appreciated
22nd Mar 2014 7:02pm
