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Relentless
My sins are relentless
My addiction burns thru my viens
The eyes of blackness watching me unfold
Succumbing to its grip
I open my naked flesh fully exposed
Pouring out my bleeding heart unto thee
Ghosts that dwells among
Dragging me further down in a hole
I wish I can fly but my wings have been denied
My sins are relentless
It never cease to feed
Blackening me further
The light in my eyes have died out
My dreams have gone to sleep, never to resurrect
Nightmares have become my reality
My souls cries aloud singing
Carmina Burana
O Fortuna
-ADuarte
Published 30th Dec 2013
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30th Dec 2013 3:14am
Thank u Blue_Angel u r so awesome and u should listen to the song to really feel this piece. I tried to post it with my piece but it wouldn't allow me to so if u like take a listen
yes,,, I found it on youtube.... magnificent... it sort of makes me think of the omen ... for some reason... brilliant inspiration :)
Anonymous
30th Dec 2013 3:54am
oh were you listening to O fortuna, Carl orff? i love that, its absolutely amazing, now i can see how inspired you were to write this.
Beautiful and captivating, i love how you take a dark theme and draw your reader in.
Beautiful and captivating, i love how you take a dark theme and draw your reader in.
30th Dec 2013 4:23am
Aww Vee u jus made my night and watered my eyes thank u for tht and yesbthis song I love and its is the inspiration to this piece I made a video of it me reciting my piece and singing acapella o fortuna it needs redun but its dark though is done they I wanted to do it but it could be better but nevertheless its sweet
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Dec 2013 4:31am
30th Dec 2013 4:30am
I'm posting the link here for everyone else to enjoy as they read your poem :)
http://youtu.be/GD3VsesSBsw
Hopefully you can redo and post it at du, i'd love to hear your spoken word.
http://youtu.be/GD3VsesSBsw
Hopefully you can redo and post it at du, i'd love to hear your spoken word.
30th Dec 2013 4:37am
I attempted to upload it but it denied me access it needs to be done on the youtube format it has for multimedia. It wouldn't allow me to post it from my gallery
Anonymous
30th Dec 2013 4:42am
yes its easier if its from a youtube account, that's how most do it on here.
30th Dec 2013 4:43am
30th Dec 2013 5:03am
'O Fortuna' is extraordinary classical music & is certainly inspiring. I watched a video of it conducted by Andre' Rieu. nice work on the poem...
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Anonymous
8th Aug 2017 1:34pm
This is an amazing write!
