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They've come true
The memories burned away
were ones who's reminiscent touch
fondled my mind the gentlest
years spent yearning
lessons bitter in their learning
left laying in the dregs of lidded eyes
clutching at the feet of euphoric highs
nightmares
of shining lights who's embrace
is the touch of sun warmed stone
drifting
pulled under by hungry hands
from beneath the tired blue
I saw it all
but I'm awake
were ones who's reminiscent touch
fondled my mind the gentlest
years spent yearning
lessons bitter in their learning
left laying in the dregs of lidded eyes
clutching at the feet of euphoric highs
nightmares
of shining lights who's embrace
is the touch of sun warmed stone
drifting
pulled under by hungry hands
from beneath the tired blue
I saw it all
but I'm awake
Published 30th Dec 2013
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30th Dec 2013 3:16am
Wow DystopianMelody
pulled under by hungry hands
from beneath the tired blue
I saw it all
but im awake
I feel this piece pulling me way deep
I feel the hands gripping me
this is awesome
pulled under by hungry hands
from beneath the tired blue
I saw it all
but im awake
I feel this piece pulling me way deep
I feel the hands gripping me
this is awesome
30th Dec 2013 3:42am
30th Dec 2013 11:03am
3rd Jan 2014 3:29am
30th Dec 2013 4:50pm
wonderful title and ending. the body of the poem is a stuttered melancholy...like a butter knife dragged over scar tissue. I love it.
3rd Jan 2014 3:35am
I wanted the 2nd stanza be slightly easy on the lips, and the 1st and 3rd to be a bit irregular with odd pauses. I wasn't quite sure it would come through on the page though. Thank you for the read and comment.
1st Jan 2014 8:02pm
3rd Jan 2014 3:35am
