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even when
even when you are there you are always here
even when i have never touched you
i touch you in everything
even when you have forgotten me
i will always remember you
even when i die
i will have always lived
with you
in these words
even when i have never touched you
i touch you in everything
even when you have forgotten me
i will always remember you
even when i die
i will have always lived
with you
in these words
Published 27th Dec 2013
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29th Dec 2013 10:53am
This is a lovely poignant and brilliantly elegant piece in it's simplicity and message ...
Bravo!
LSP
Bravo!
LSP
30th Dec 2013 5:08am
Thank you LSP for the encouragement that these words find a home outside themselves. When I convey my deepest emotions I seem to use the smallest words.
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2nd Nov 2014 4:50am
2nd Nov 2014 5:17am
i'll take your bow kindly but lift your chin gently to look you in the eyes to say hello and thank you
2nd Nov 2014 7:56am
