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'Greatest Xmas Gift'
...If I could have my greatest wish
It'd be to hold you close my dear
Santa, if you do truly exist
grant me her, my one gift,
my dream, right here
If I held no greater a hope
It'd be her body,
skin to skin,
braving life's wind
my anchor,
to help me cope
If silly lil' dreams
could intervene
'Tween reality's
impenetrable seams
I'd happily dance with you
thru the water's fall, n' streams
Oh, I'm so lost
locked, n loaded
in my starry eyes, I beam
the sight of you, here with me
unfettered, the joyous screams
happiness, is our harmony
If only this Christmas
could grant
my greatest wish
I'd want it to be you,
my one, n' only
greatest gift...
It'd be to hold you close my dear
Santa, if you do truly exist
grant me her, my one gift,
my dream, right here
If I held no greater a hope
It'd be her body,
skin to skin,
braving life's wind
my anchor,
to help me cope
If silly lil' dreams
could intervene
'Tween reality's
impenetrable seams
I'd happily dance with you
thru the water's fall, n' streams
Oh, I'm so lost
locked, n loaded
in my starry eyes, I beam
the sight of you, here with me
unfettered, the joyous screams
happiness, is our harmony
If only this Christmas
could grant
my greatest wish
I'd want it to be you,
my one, n' only
greatest gift...
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Re: 'Greatest Xmas Gift'
23rd Dec 2013 3:14pm
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23rd Dec 2013 3:22pm
Aaaaawwww thanks bro! Ur so wonderful n I'm humbled always n truly appreciate you kid :)
Re: 'Greatest Xmas Gift'
23rd Dec 2013 3:36pm
Loved the flow of this...and of course the beauty behind....makes me smile nostaglically!
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23rd Dec 2013 5:01pm
My sweet lady, YOU make me smile :) thank you for that n always for ur support... Merry Xmas! :)
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23rd Dec 2013 5:09pm
My support is but a mere inkling of the smiles and awe you are able ink out!!! My pleasure!
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23rd Dec 2013 5:53pm
Re: 'Greatest Xmas Gift'
23rd Dec 2013 5:18pm
Now that you have written this piece that is touching my heart so much I look forward to this type of writing from you, mixed with your erotic hotness when you message me....... ;)
What can I say I loved it!
What can I say I loved it!
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Re: 'Greatest Xmas Gift'
23rd Dec 2013 5:25pm
Well I'm glad you liked my dream stained mind lol
Thank you so much for the very sweet comment sweetie! :)
Thank you so much for the very sweet comment sweetie! :)
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23rd Dec 2013 7:56pm
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23rd Dec 2013 9:00pm
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23rd Dec 2013 11:58pm
"If silly lil' dreams
could intervene
'Tween reality's
impenetrable seams
I'd happily dance with you
thru the water's fall, n' streams"
Best part. Reminded me of this quote:
"Lose your dreams and you might lose your mind" - Mick Jagger
could intervene
'Tween reality's
impenetrable seams
I'd happily dance with you
thru the water's fall, n' streams"
Best part. Reminded me of this quote:
"Lose your dreams and you might lose your mind" - Mick Jagger
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24th Dec 2013 00:13am
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24th Dec 2013 3:51am
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24th Dec 2013 8:41am
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24th Dec 2013 10:42am
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24th Dec 2013 12:46pm
Thank you sweetheart your so kind, I appreciate you
so much! Merry Christmas to you n yours :)
so much! Merry Christmas to you n yours :)
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Hope you will be granted this wish, Poe! Great Christmas writing! Merry Christmas to you!
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25th Dec 2013 11:40pm
Well I'm a dreamer but I'm not crazy lol I know
just becuz uy wish it don't make it happen lol
Thank you my dear, Merry Christmas to u as well! :)
just becuz uy wish it don't make it happen lol
Thank you my dear, Merry Christmas to u as well! :)
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25th Dec 2013 11:54pm
Aren't we all dreamers? Perhaps I CAN make it happen? Friends call me a witch ...
*kissblowsfairydust*
*kissblowsfairydust*
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