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Roll Back This...
Roll back this reality,
The skin and bone
That guards my heart,
So that I can see the clock,
The numbers counting down
To our meeting.
The skin and bone
That guards my heart,
So that I can see the clock,
The numbers counting down
To our meeting.
Published 23rd Dec 2013
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23rd Dec 2013 10:35am
31st Dec 2013 8:53pm
31st Dec 2013 10:24am
The anticipation is palpable in this short work. I sense a tension here as the guardedness slowly mounts the readiness. It's a profound moment when the armor falls into that long-awaited desire that's been tick tick ticking away at the heart, wearing away the defenses. Fighters & lovers...most people are one or the other. You've always struck me as a bit of both.
You've been on a roll lately & I'm very glad to see that. Keep up the great works...
You've been on a roll lately & I'm very glad to see that. Keep up the great works...
31st Dec 2013 8:57pm
Thank you, ButcherScraps. Your comments always leave me humbled and honored. Thank you.
