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Commuter
on hips of rose valor
I adorn
eternal typeface
upright speaking
lights above
swung for movement
oscillating through
the blood
height seeking
crumpled old men
to cash in at the nearest
heartache trust
deep pockets averting
eye contact
I burn invisible
black flames eloping
with white smoke
a skyline borrowed
nugatory numbers floating
between heavy particles
fragmented monoliths
towering
twisted metal all upward
the world as stranger
dessicated in the ethos
of another book
lining a well articulated
skeleton
tell the bluejays
they are just visiting
now
and remind the waters
of never-receding history
I can barely breathe
on the subway
I adorn
eternal typeface
upright speaking
lights above
swung for movement
oscillating through
the blood
height seeking
crumpled old men
to cash in at the nearest
heartache trust
deep pockets averting
eye contact
I burn invisible
black flames eloping
with white smoke
a skyline borrowed
nugatory numbers floating
between heavy particles
fragmented monoliths
towering
twisted metal all upward
the world as stranger
dessicated in the ethos
of another book
lining a well articulated
skeleton
tell the bluejays
they are just visiting
now
and remind the waters
of never-receding history
I can barely breathe
on the subway
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