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TRAIN
At the peak of intercourse
the couple is a locomotive in full steam.
the couple is a locomotive in full steam.
Published 21st Dec 2013
| Edited 22nd Dec 2013
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Anonymous
21st Dec 2013 9:44pm
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22nd Dec 2013 10:22am
21st Dec 2013 10:12pm
Good metaphor, especially if the noises made have the rhythm of a train (especially a steam one - 'steamy' double entendre here).
22nd Dec 2013 10:24am
Thank you for your comment, Solomon
That is why I like short poems. We are forced to concentrate all immagery in a few words.
That is why I like short poems. We are forced to concentrate all immagery in a few words.
