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Nothings for free

I can help but see
everything he means
to me, everything we
are ment to be.

I cant help but
think he could
be my key, to
a better world.

I know in my heart
in his arms is
where, I want and
need to be.

I dont trust lightly
and I never give my
heart with out a fee,
because nothing is ever
for free.

Written by redrose

(Ambur)

Published 20th Dec 2013

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Re: Nothings for free

Angel_Of_Darkness (Rune L)

4th Jan 2014 3:59am

Mystical, mysterious, you'd be worth the fee for him. :) Speaking of worth, is it worth nothing at all to the 16 people who read this before me to comment? I mean, I feel somewhat good about myself when I'm the first person to give feedback, but I feel so disappointed when after ten or more reads a poem still hasn't gotten at LEAST one comment. If a picture's worth a thousand words, a poem is worth so much more, but no one ever seems to give a crap. Why?

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redrose (Ambur)

6th Jan 2014 3:17pm

Well thank you Angel. Im gald you liked it and if your the only comment i get ill be happy with it. :)

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Re: Nothings for free

Poetikmind (_---_)

31st Jan 2014 5:10pm

Your heart shouldn't come with a fee sweetheart, though
I agree, still a heart giving love for free no strings attached
Is the BEST of what a REAL love will ever be...

Of course that don't mean you should be foolish
if there are obvious signs you're bring used, or mistreated!
I like ur piece, n ur gentle heart :)