Dead And Buried

Very dark I love it..peace Crimsin

Thank you. I actually wrote it 2o plus yrs ago, glad it still holds water.

Have to say this has an angry depression wrapped in it.

I liked the simple but effective rhymeing outro:

Dead and buried
Buried and dead
your life is over
your fucking dead

Is this a typo?

"you loved ones mourn" - "your"

graet read,

Hooded

typo indeed. lol
thanks again though, i wrote this moons ago.

all i can say is this is awesome to the max loves it!!!

I always think about being lowered into the ground in a coffin it does freak me out even though it would be when you can't actually see or feel anything.One more idea is the zombies myth which were inspired by real-life events where kids were heavily drugged so their family thought they were dead.Then they were buried and later dug up to be slaves on farms far away-can't remember which country it was wherever they do voodoo? Also a good idea for poem would be what it would be like on an autopsy table if you could see what they were doing to you in some way.Love this poem it captures the feeling of life goes on for others after we're gone, the world is still here x    

Thanks my dearest. Yeh the autopsy table thing could be a good write.