deepundergroundpoetry.com
Senryu 3-5-3 (2013-12-15)
Gabi's love
Beauty of sunrise
Melts my heart
[/font]
Published 15th Dec 2013
| Edited 29th Dec 2013
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 2
reading list entries 0
comments 4
reads 555
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
16th Dec 2013 1:43am
Malin, how about a suggestion?
Gabi's love
beauty of sunrise
melts my heart
I'm thinking the haiku makes more sense and flows better :)
Gabi's love
beauty of sunrise
melts my heart
I'm thinking the haiku makes more sense and flows better :)
You know what I think about your suggestions, Vee! Always good and with delicate taste! I agree. Thank you so much, Vee.
Anonymous
16th Dec 2013 2:29am
ah i like it!!
and you're welcome, glad to be of help :)
and you're welcome, glad to be of help :)
16th Dec 2013 2:31am
