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On the discovery that life isn’t like the movies…
he stopped,
took a deep breath,
exhaled
slow
ly
took a deep breath,
exhaled
slow
ly
Published 14th Dec 2013
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2013 5:09am
we all stop
to take a breath
of reality
to take a breath
of reality
14th Dec 2013 5:11am
Anonymous
14th Dec 2013 5:16am
is it breathing that tires you
or living to survive
or living to survive
14th Dec 2013 5:17am
Anonymous
14th Dec 2013 5:23am
isn't your life up to you how it is lived
like the choice of breathing bad or good air
like the choice of breathing bad or good air
Anonymous
14th Dec 2013 9:25am
It can leave you feeling deflated...
Oh, and must say that I absolutely LOVE this painting...
Oh, and must say that I absolutely LOVE this painting...
14th Dec 2013 9:21pm
Anonymous
15th Dec 2013 00:53am
Inhaling is magic ... scents are some of the strongest triggers to memories ... or building them.
I must go look at your works again ... this one speaks...
I must go look at your works again ... this one speaks...
16th Dec 2013 10:54pm
I first realised that life wasn't
like the movies when I got up
and left the room and it followed
me...
like the movies when I got up
and left the room and it followed
me...
17th Dec 2013 11:11pm
Anonymous
18th Dec 2013 10:57pm
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19th Dec 2013 6:32pm
19th Dec 2013 6:44pm
And this is what must be done at times...a pause...and a deep breath..helps center! Enjoyed!
19th Dec 2013 11:52pm
25th Dec 2013 10:58pm
7th Jan 2014 3:40am
This is a moment of thought perfectly captured in words. I like your style mate
7th Jan 2014 6:42pm
