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Infatuation
Seventh wife…
As dry as a winter rose
You dejected me on a fry pan of romance!
That love is nude
And every opposite sex is now rude
Like a beautiful boat at a distance…
An alarm clock
So close to the hours of my youth…
You are the seventh wife of my continuing prose!
As dry as a winter rose
You dejected me on a fry pan of romance!
That love is nude
And every opposite sex is now rude
Like a beautiful boat at a distance…
An alarm clock
So close to the hours of my youth…
You are the seventh wife of my continuing prose!
Published 13th Dec 2013
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Seven wives one too many
You also are as brief
as brief one ought to be
but a seventh wife
deserves much more
as only a hard-on one
can dare
through a seventh one
a child bear
you haven't yet the experience
the eighth one will be a challenge
take care,
practice with the first six
to steer so many wives is rare
even Henry..
couldn't manage it
You also are as brief
as brief one ought to be
but a seventh wife
deserves much more
as only a hard-on one
can dare
through a seventh one
a child bear
you haven't yet the experience
the eighth one will be a challenge
take care,
practice with the first six
to steer so many wives is rare
even Henry..
couldn't manage it
15th Dec 2013 6:29pm
This one is about infatuation and the seventh wife means that this is not real love or attention to the opposite sex but the froth of mind that wants to consume seven wonders of beauty in one girl...poetic merely in the sense...but I like your comments...too cute & thanx...
15th Dec 2013 10:10pm
How Glad I am
you have enlightened
a rare poet of your kind
one loves to keep in ones inner mind
hope all you know always have you in mind
you are a person
imaginative creative and kind
my poetry and comments are of virginous kind
you have enlightened
a rare poet of your kind
one loves to keep in ones inner mind
hope all you know always have you in mind
you are a person
imaginative creative and kind
my poetry and comments are of virginous kind
13th Dec 2013 11:33pm
an alarm clock? what a surprising line that is.
i wonder why you need awaking.
i wonder why you need awaking.
15th Dec 2013 6:31pm
To awake from the dream and web of infatuation and to merely appreciate that youth is on the threshold and it will be over soon into some matured love:-)
