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say it to my face
you look at me
you laugh at me
you pretend I dont exist
you think i cant hear you
but guess what i can
you think it hurts me
the words dont hurt
but what hurts is that
you took my friends
you took over my life
and do you know what really pisses me off
you are such a coward that you dont have the fucking nerve to say it to my fucking face
so if you have something to say say it to my fucking face bitch
you laugh at me
you pretend I dont exist
you think i cant hear you
but guess what i can
you think it hurts me
the words dont hurt
but what hurts is that
you took my friends
you took over my life
and do you know what really pisses me off
you are such a coward that you dont have the fucking nerve to say it to my fucking face
so if you have something to say say it to my fucking face bitch
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Re: say it to my face
11th Dec 2013 4:04pm
I like this Brit. Feelings so strong should be expressed in the same fashion. Thanks girl..
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re: Re: say it to my face
11th Dec 2013 4:05pm
Re: say it to my face
11th Dec 2013 4:22pm
Hells yes lol strong and powerful who ever is talking about you tell me I will find thwm at school tomorrow and beat em up lol.
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re: Re: say it to my face
11th Dec 2013 4:24pm
raven are really back to this its just people no need to beat people up im a big girl
Re: say it to my face
I know lol but I will if I have to although that would not look good for a Harved girl :) lol
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re: Re: say it to my face
11th Dec 2013 4:32pm
Re: say it to my face
11th Dec 2013 4:30pm
echoed laughter I have seen not said
are ashes to me gone dead
go ahead coward have it your way
I still stand taller bravely every day.
Your words are ones to live by to live with.
are ashes to me gone dead
go ahead coward have it your way
I still stand taller bravely every day.
Your words are ones to live by to live with.
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Re: say it to my face
11th Dec 2013 6:18pm
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12th Dec 2013 4:09pm
Re: say it to my face
16th Dec 2013 8:27pm
you took my friends////
u called her rightly
why not have your own
private peesssss
why steal
u called her rightly
why not have your own
private peesssss
why steal
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Re: say it to my face
19th Dec 2013 11:06pm
re: Re: say it to my face
19th Dec 2013 11:28pm
I will ask nicely but just because I ask her didn't mean she will stop It never works
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20th Dec 2013 2:00am
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7th Apr 2014 4:32pm
Re: say it to my face
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Apr 2014 11:56am
5th Apr 2014 11:13pm
I like the title and the poem you've done here. You're a great writer. Your work amuses me in the over the top way in which it's put down. Maybe I'm not supposed to feel it's funny because you're describing a serious situation, but I end up almost laughing at your aggressive and extreme 'in your face' style -i.e, 'If you have something to say, say it to my effin' face bitch! You don't take any prisoners in this piece. The only thing that would make this poem easier on the reader is using those commas; example: 'But guess what, I can'. I'm no grammar expert but you'll be able to express your stuff better with them. A great read all the same!
See, I almost said it to your face!
See, I almost said it to your face!
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