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cigarette
Pulling out an unlit cigarette
From a pack of trouble and struggle
She puts it to her perfectly painted lips
She inhales with such fierceness
As if she's hoping to hide her shame and remorse behind the cloud of smoke
From a pack of trouble and struggle
She puts it to her perfectly painted lips
She inhales with such fierceness
As if she's hoping to hide her shame and remorse behind the cloud of smoke
Published 9th Dec 2013
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9th Dec 2013 8:06am
Anonymous
9th Dec 2013 10:59am
Great pen here! This is my favorite of yours so far....
9th Dec 2013 5:53pm
10th Dec 2013 1:02am
10th Dec 2013 3:06am
10th Dec 2013 11:35pm
Cigarette
Woman's painted lips
I wish its red
Dark red
And smoke
It's perfection...
It's has been a long time I didn't read anything shaped this much perfectly , thank you .. I just got the vision of what u wrote literary in my mind
Woman's painted lips
I wish its red
Dark red
And smoke
It's perfection...
It's has been a long time I didn't read anything shaped this much perfectly , thank you .. I just got the vision of what u wrote literary in my mind
11th Dec 2013 2:06am
12th Dec 2013 9:44am
As a smoker, and not completely proud of it, I'll say it speaks volumes in such a concise, beautiful way. Well done.
22nd Dec 2013 7:23am
This is awesome, when i was reading it i couldn't help but imagine Marla Singer from Fight Club, its perfect
23rd Dec 2013 9:52pm
