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No impulse control
The room bustles
With beer banter
and cat calls
drunken drivel
and energy
friends find
ganja to hoot
happy to have
no impulse control
I implied jokingly
kill the lights
let's make a messy
memory
nighttime overcame perseverance
questions of reality start to unfold
various wails, x's and o's and yells
zoom around the room
With beer banter
and cat calls
drunken drivel
and energy
friends find
ganja to hoot
happy to have
no impulse control
I implied jokingly
kill the lights
let's make a messy
memory
nighttime overcame perseverance
questions of reality start to unfold
various wails, x's and o's and yells
zoom around the room
Published 3rd Feb 2011
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3rd Feb 2011 7:34am
i love the imagery this poem is portraying. great stuff keep it up yeh !
3rd Feb 2011 7:37am
3rd Feb 2011 8:43am
i can relate so well! great atmosphere. [:
edit: i've just realized that it's alphabetical. even better.
edit: i've just realized that it's alphabetical. even better.
3rd Feb 2011 11:43pm
"let's make a messy memory" my fav too
and oh my gosh! alphabetical alliteration!!!
drugs will give and drugs will take
but in between
(within the break)
the words we find
are ones we make :)
and oh my gosh! alphabetical alliteration!!!
drugs will give and drugs will take
but in between
(within the break)
the words we find
are ones we make :)
