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You - Quadrology of Senryu
Tender lips so warm
Brush agonizingly slow
Up and down my spine
Subtle fingertips
Tease tantalizingly soft
The tip of my pearl
Tongue’s glistening lanes
feeding their moist shallowness
to my stream of lust.
How could I resist
Your disarming loveliness
Without being charmed
Brush agonizingly slow
Up and down my spine
Subtle fingertips
Tease tantalizingly soft
The tip of my pearl
Tongue’s glistening lanes
feeding their moist shallowness
to my stream of lust.
How could I resist
Your disarming loveliness
Without being charmed
Published 7th Dec 2013
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7th Dec 2013 8:58pm
resistance is futile...
tender, soft, sensually erotic,
the perfect read on a rainy day...
waiting for my lover...
tender, soft, sensually erotic,
the perfect read on a rainy day...
waiting for my lover...
7th Dec 2013 9:20pm
:-). Waiting for your lover ...
That just sounds like another poem,
a very wonderful one.
Pen it slowly and carefully, especially the space
between the lines.
Ah, by the way: Thanks for the
passionate words, J.!
That just sounds like another poem,
a very wonderful one.
Pen it slowly and carefully, especially the space
between the lines.
Ah, by the way: Thanks for the
passionate words, J.!
7th Dec 2013 9:07pm
7th Dec 2013 9:21pm
Uh! Waiting for your lover, too?
*smile*. Thanks a lot, Solomon!
I much appreciate your comment!
*smile*. Thanks a lot, Solomon!
I much appreciate your comment!
Anonymous
7th Dec 2013 9:44pm
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7th Dec 2013 9:47pm
Seductive response, Gabriel, happy you
like it ...
Wish you a sexy evening and
thanks for your lovely comment!
like it ...
Wish you a sexy evening and
thanks for your lovely comment!
7th Dec 2013 11:16pm
I think
"disarming loveliness"
can't really be bettered
as a comment...
there, you've written
your own review and
included it in the poem!
seriously, Chi, it's all
beautiful..:)
"disarming loveliness"
can't really be bettered
as a comment...
there, you've written
your own review and
included it in the poem!
seriously, Chi, it's all
beautiful..:)
7th Dec 2013 11:34pm
Oh Paul, YOU really
flatter and disarm me ...
That's a heartwarming comment
and from your lips
a real big compliment.
Thank you so much ...
flatter and disarm me ...
That's a heartwarming comment
and from your lips
a real big compliment.
Thank you so much ...
8th Dec 2013 00:06am
expert delivery of passionate words and images, wonderful poetry. I love your writing!
8th Dec 2013 00:38am
Thank you so much, sensorydecay!
I'm glad you like it and humbled
by your lovely words!
I'm glad you like it and humbled
by your lovely words!
8th Dec 2013 2:01am
romantic & intimate poetics, Chi, in the strict format of the Oriental form...
8th Dec 2013 1:33pm
I very much appreciate
your lovely comment, John. Thank you!
Didn't know that this strict Oriental
format leaves so much room
for intimacy and passion.
In the meantime I'm addicted to it :-).
your lovely comment, John. Thank you!
Didn't know that this strict Oriental
format leaves so much room
for intimacy and passion.
In the meantime I'm addicted to it :-).
8th Dec 2013 2:17am
8th Dec 2013 1:30pm
Not only :-).
Very passionate, too.
Thank you, dear Sarah for your
kind feedback, as always!
Very passionate, too.
Thank you, dear Sarah for your
kind feedback, as always!
8th Dec 2013 1:13pm
8th Dec 2013 1:29pm
Yes it was. Up and down the spine
with goose flesh and other flesh ...
Thanks Hash!
Oh, that rhymes :-).
with goose flesh and other flesh ...
Thanks Hash!
Oh, that rhymes :-).
8th Dec 2013 3:26pm
A delicious buffet of words with an equally
delicious amount of imagery...
Damn, I think I just got pregnant! lol
delicious amount of imagery...
Damn, I think I just got pregnant! lol
8th Dec 2013 4:34pm
PREGNANT? Show me pics, show me pics!!!
Thank you dear Poe,
for your magnificent words. I love them!
Thank you dear Poe,
for your magnificent words. I love them!
8th Dec 2013 5:33pm
8th Dec 2013 6:04pm
Thanks a lot for you reassuring words, JAZZ!
The last stanza was indeed necessary
though at first I went for a triology.
That would have hindered a satisfying finishing.
Good to have your opinion on that!
The last stanza was indeed necessary
though at first I went for a triology.
That would have hindered a satisfying finishing.
Good to have your opinion on that!
8th Dec 2013 6:13pm
8th Dec 2013 7:30pm
Uh ... one day they will say:
Miss Chi has done enough with quadrolpologies, hahaha! Just joking!
Miss Chi has done enough with quadrolpologies, hahaha! Just joking!
Anonymous
8th Dec 2013 7:23pm
Beautifully expressive and sensually delicious ink dear Iris. Wow! This is a journey made for two..of You :) xo
8th Dec 2013 7:35pm
I was sure you'd capture that :-).
My dear Tom, I love your sweet words
and I'm humbled by them :-). Thank you <3!
My dear Tom, I love your sweet words
and I'm humbled by them :-). Thank you <3!
9th Dec 2013 4:26am
Quite sensual Ms Chi, the imagery is quite vivid with notes of passion and we are devouring every word :)
9th Dec 2013 7:34am
Thanks a lot, Vee, your feedback means a lot to me.
Sensuality, although love so very much more, is so devouring a feeling and sometimes hard to digest.
But the yearning keeps us live :-).
Sensuality, although love so very much more, is so devouring a feeling and sometimes hard to digest.
But the yearning keeps us live :-).
Anonymous
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9th Dec 2013 4:26am
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9th Dec 2013 7:37am
And exquisitely penned
is your anwer! Thank you so much!
I love your poetic responses!
is your anwer! Thank you so much!
I love your poetic responses!
13th Dec 2013 8:42am
It never occurred to me that the pied piper is a woman. Makes sense now I think of it. I have no defence but to follow your words in vision. My first read of yours Miss Chi. Enchanting. I will return for more. Thank you.
17th Dec 2013 8:42pm
Yes, please return for more and reward my effort with your enchanting words! Thank you so much, Twitch! Very welcome, your comment! I'm humbled!
