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At 7:38pm on December 4th I was given great advice.

 Awkwardly staring at me.
With a Face full of hair.
And Eyes pouring wisdom
A beautiful man shared with me
His fruit from the tree of knowledge.

Standing in the door way.
One hand on the handle
The other on his chin.
He stared at me and said:

Its simple, really.
It's a case of incapability.
See, you may think
you have everything in common with this girl
but apparently there is something
You both do not share.
And In the pit of her stomach
She knows this
She can feel it.
At times you come across people
That share your common interests
That share the things you love
Books, movies, food and the outdoors
But there's something that may not be very apparent in the beginning.
The attraction is just not there.
The connection between your hearts does not exist.
You are not compatible.
And when you both cannot fit in that way.
It just doesn't work.
It doesn't feel right.
It will fail.

In a matter of moments
All self pity was eradicated
All misery was set on fire.
For the first time in weeks
Someone made sense to me.
Someone gave me advise
that would change my perspective
On life.
Written by EllaNeftali (Ella.Neftali.)
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