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Brandy
Sliding down my throat
The liquid felt so thick.
Caramel to the color,
Hard to your dick.
With each new shot poured
My mind and body soared.
It was not the brandy;
No, that just helped you along.
That taboo touch, I needed it;
Your fingers moved in song.
And while you sang
My voice escaped with no shame.
The liquid felt so thick.
Caramel to the color,
Hard to your dick.
With each new shot poured
My mind and body soared.
It was not the brandy;
No, that just helped you along.
That taboo touch, I needed it;
Your fingers moved in song.
And while you sang
My voice escaped with no shame.
Published 2nd Dec 2013
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Anonymous
3rd Dec 2013 00:15am
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3rd Dec 2013 00:44am
Thanks, it's good to be unique. It makes an individual truly memorable :).
3rd Dec 2013 00:29am
Oh dear! I like it though, such honest, beautiful vulgarity with a depth of imagery that cannot just be imagined, but felt... I can feel it on my tongue. I can taste the sweet semen serum between my lips. Lol. And I haven't even fully tasted it before.
Thanks! As my English teacher always said "show, not tell." What's a better way to practice that than some hot and steamy lusty writings? ;) My apologies- but where did it suggest oral? A little bit curious. I didn't intend to convey oral.
3rd Dec 2013 1:40am
3rd Dec 2013 2:14am
Haha, thank you. ;) I try to make each piece I write different. I seem to have a hard time with it though :)
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2013 3:32pm
m_abbott1999,
I think you've struck a note with this one and I like the smooth, thick sound of it! Enjoyed!
tornado
I think you've struck a note with this one and I like the smooth, thick sound of it! Enjoyed!
tornado
3rd Dec 2013 3:35pm
4th Dec 2013 5:20pm
