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Inside The Bismuth Egg-Where Does Midnight Take You?
In the heaven of midnight
amongst the clouds and cherubs
is a woman ruled by 3's
Raven Starless
she wants 5 but the universe wont have it
it must always be 3
fate
karma
destiny
she swam with the fish
she ran with the fawn
dreaming of them everyday
the layers have separated them
uniting them only in thought
transcendentally
fate
karma
destiny
her 3 crows watch from the trees
cool wind is upon them
her heart beats 3
her mind is consumed 3
what must be, must be
fate
karma
destiny
amongst the clouds and cherubs
is a woman ruled by 3's
Raven Starless
she wants 5 but the universe wont have it
it must always be 3
fate
karma
destiny
she swam with the fish
she ran with the fawn
dreaming of them everyday
the layers have separated them
uniting them only in thought
transcendentally
fate
karma
destiny
her 3 crows watch from the trees
cool wind is upon them
her heart beats 3
her mind is consumed 3
what must be, must be
fate
karma
destiny
Published 29th Nov 2013
| Edited 2nd Dec 2013
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30th Nov 2013 2:18pm
Poet-Friend:
At one level your glorious poem is funny. Only 3, for goodness sake. At another level your remarkable poem is tragic. Only 3, for goodness sake. At a third level your wonderful poem is mystical or contemplative, as 3 is a "holy" number (as is 7, 4 and 40, to mention merely three: there we go again, 3).
Great poem, loved reading it. Is there only 3 in Detroit?
marcella1
At one level your glorious poem is funny. Only 3, for goodness sake. At another level your remarkable poem is tragic. Only 3, for goodness sake. At a third level your wonderful poem is mystical or contemplative, as 3 is a "holy" number (as is 7, 4 and 40, to mention merely three: there we go again, 3).
Great poem, loved reading it. Is there only 3 in Detroit?
marcella1
30th Nov 2013 5:57pm
1st Dec 2013 8:56pm
