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Eyes Half Shut

I remember the day you died.
The last moments of your life
Were harsh to watch.
You stared up at me with a painful smile.
With eyes half closed. Half shut.
You acknowledged me.
Then they wheeled you off.
I wish I said good bye.
Written by EllaNeftali (Ella.Neftali.)
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